Those four words, those four words
Cut through my heart like a knife through warm butter
Leaving a gaping chasm
Now I stand, soulless and heart-broken
And although in pain, nothing can pain me no more
Those four words, those four words
Shredded my heart like scissors through paper
They scattered the pieces far
Now I stand, a dark and empty corpse
And although in pain, nothing can pain me no more.
Those four words, those four words
Cut through my heart like a knife through warm butter
And lifeless I lay; until that same blade does mend me.
Excellent . loved it.
this is VERY good.. like like and like
Thanks
Great poem. I’ve nominated you for the Traffic Driver Award. If you’re interested go to my blog and follow the instructions. Cheers, Kate
Thank you very much
I’m feeling it!
sweet
Thank you
I’ve felt this before myself. Good description of it.
Thanks. What made you feel like this, then?
“I ate your pizza”
No, not really, but I’d rather not say 
I ate your pizza????? What’s that mean
I couldn’t resist
I’m sure I’ve written poems about it myself, my friend.
Yes, I suppose lots of people have experienced it- and if there is a poet that has experienced it, he may likely write about it.
It is surely easier to write poems if you are writing about something that has happened to you, because you truly know how it feels!
The poem has volume in it that you keep it reading till the end of the line.. Vvery Good.. But it’s quite like a teaser poem.. I felt it had part 2… lol.. But it’s great
Yes. You may be right. I wonder what I could say in the part 2?!
And, thank you!!
G, you are quiet the poet. I love it! I used to write poetry, started when I was about 11. It’s a GREAT way to express yourself and get those feelings out of your head, your heart, your soul. I was never as talented as you though!! Your insights are beautiful <3 Auntie H xx
Thanks heather (and cousins!) Do you still write poetry? Does Ewan write poetry?
I immediately started thinking about the words and what they might have been. Moving!
Very nice read
As I read this, I wanted to know what those four words were, and yet I didn’t want to know. I like that. It lets me as a reader imagine what those four words would be for myself as well. Nice work.