Sometimes
“Leave!” I say.
My words sting my dry lips
I never knew of one,
Who broke his own heart
But sometimes…
One must do evil
To do good!
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Above is a poem I wrote yesterday inspired by a scene in White Fang, the film:
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If you liked my poem, check out more of my poems here!
Thanks!
Ouch! That hurt. I was the one asked to “leave” & that “evil person” did break his own heart & stole mine instead
ps: Still waiting for the good …
pps: will check out your other poems
Beautiful poem, and so fitting to the emotions in that particular scene.
Thank you!
Heyooo GMan, I nominated you for the Versatile Blogger Award. Here is the link. http://therantingpapizilla.wordpress.com/2013/01/10/the-versatile-blogger-award/
Thanks for the nomination
This was a very interesting poem. I enjoy how the inspiration came from the scene. It was very well written. You should check out some my of poetry as well. I think you would enjoy it. http://www.michaelthewriterguy.wordpress.com
Thank you!
And I will check your poems out in a bit! Thanks!
I really like “I never knew of one / Who broke his own heart”.
Thank you!