Those Four Words
Those four words, those four words
Cut through my heart like a knife through warm butter
Leaving a gaping chasm
Now I stand, soulless and heart-broken
And although in pain, nothing can pain me no more
Those four words, those four words
Shredded my heart like scissors through paper
They scattered the pieces far
Now I stand, a dark and empty corpse
And although in pain, nothing can pain me no more.
Those four words, those four words
Cut through my heart like a knife through warm butter
And lifeless I lay; until that same blade does mend me.
You- Like Nothing Else
Your smile like the sun
Burning down into darkness
Your song like the birds
Singing their beautiful melody
Your movement like the waves
Swishing with elegance and peace.
You- Like Nothing Else
Radiant and Captivating
“I read this and envision a man totally captivated by the woman he loves……..beautiful!”- Kim
“Lovely. Just beautiful.” – RL King
Shining Axe Poem
I wander through the wild wood-land Where the great oak trees stand As the trees dance and swing The gentle wind does calmly sing Its beautiful song of peace But then suddenly; the tune does cease Something is terribly wrong In the forest, strong Here come men into the land Shining axes in each hand With their axes they chop and thump Until every tree becomes a stump And as the trees do crack and splinter They leave the wood like a heath in winter I stagger through the naked wood Where the great oak trees stood. Lair of the Villains Deep in the Villains secret lair Pitch black ‘cept the lanterns do flarePassageways that seem never-ending
Paths twisting and bending -
Into the farthest room
Where the villains do loom
With their gun and their sack
Planning their moves round their table of black
The secret lair of a criminal
Where crime is commonplace and light is minimal.
Mountains Poem
Marvellous, still snow topped mountain, steep
Over the moon, to the top- the fluffy sheep
Unique mountain, standing tall
Never falling, stronger than all
To rain, no, never warm, only cold
Anything will fall against it, majestic and bold
In the sky, in the flock
Never falling, solid rock
Crystalline Being
C atching the eyes of its keepers with
R ibbons of blue glittering light.
Y ea, such beautiful crystalline beings;
S abre-sharp, fine.
T winkling like a torch in the
A byssal caves under the crust of our
L and. Transparent beauty-
S abre-sharp, fine.
Desert Island
To a desert island
S’where we float
Explore then return to the…
Ummm… where’s the boat!?
Smoothie Poem Smoothie, a shade of berry pinkIt’s so delicious, a lovely drink
Sprinkled with cinnamon, topped with cream,
You couldn’t find a better drink in your dreams!
Smoothie Poem 2.0
Smoothie, a shade of berry pink
It’s so delicious, a lovely drink
Sprinkled with cinnamon, topped with cream,
It’s a refreshing fruity, sugary dream
Owl
O h, how elegant W ise, mysterious. Such a L ethal hunterShining Guardian
Vicious, beautiful The guardian of the night Fly- twilight hunterNocturnal Magic
Silent, glowing white So beautiful and wise Nocturnal magic WinterW histling winds sweep across the lands
I ce cold hail, bitter blizzards
N asty Frostbite. Freezing cold.
T emperatures drop. Footprints
E tched into the snow
R ivers freeze over. The wind whispers- winter
Fractured Bone Poem
Fracture crack
Fracture bend
Fracture crack
Fracture mend
Fracture bend, mend, crack
Fracture crack, bend, mend
Fracture bone
Fracture clicks
Fracture bone
Fracture fix
Fracture click, fix, bone
Fracture bone, clicks, fix
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“Wow.
How so few words can illicit emotion.
Very nice.” – Di
Snow Leopard Poem
A hillock of white
Like the snow beneath it’s paws
The leopard pounces
Bravo, Tsavo
Out of bed at 6 o’clock
Into the park, to Mudanda Rock
The presence of the famed “Big Five”
Keeping the dull plains alive
Driving through to Tsavo West
For scenery it is the best
Down the road, past glittering lakes
Looking out over mountainous scapes
Moving with colour from a thousand birds
… And partly because of the elephant herds!
Back to the lodge. Getting late…
But I’ll be back ‘cos Tsavo’s great!
Barmy Boys
Silly Sammy Strew Spaghetti
Crazy Chris Chomped Confetti
Witless, Dippy
Insane, Dizzy
These barmy boys are keeping busy!
The Ligical Collymob
The ligical Collymob
With its twireling tail
Snitchering through the slob
Every human bewail
The ligical Collymob
Wondrous Stars
Like pearls on the galaxy’s pelt of lace
Like sparkling swans flying high
Like burning torches in the dark void of space
Lurking in the shadow, the masters of grace
You sit so far out of reach. Why?
Like pearls on the galaxy’s pelt of lace
To my eye you’re but a zag on the sky’s face
Shooting star, I wish only you were not so shy
Like burning torches in the dark void of space
Making the purple fields a wondrous place
Golden rain falling from the sky
Like pearls on the galaxy’s pelt of lace
What noise do you make? Like cymbal? Like bass?
Do you talk? Do you laugh? Do you, like me, sigh?
Like burning torches in the dark void of space
The study of astrology is such a beautiful case
Maybe one day you’ll visit… when you’re passing by?
Like pearls on the galaxy’s pelt of lace…
Like burning torches in the dark void of space.
Wenda and the VendorThere was a young lady named Wenda/
Who sang while buying from a vendor/
The glass cracked and smashed/
Down the contents crashed/
And the towers of Pepsi did end ‘er/
The Fallen Rose
The dark raven swoops
To rip the beautiful rose
From its once firm stem
-
And as it passes
Tears deep into its
Valiant Lupin’s blue, blue buds
With devastating talons
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“Very Edgar Allan Poe-ish. Love it!” – The Baldwin Poet
The Sword of Blood
Below the golden fields of rye
Through the caves as black as a starless night
In the fiery core the sword does lie
The sword which can any lands smite
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The sword of fury, blood and war
Not made for the sheath of just any knight…
To feed it’s hunger with death and gore
Only the darkest souls this sword unites
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Who’d have thought such a beautiful blade
Could such seeds of destruction sew
Such horror could not be portrayed
Oh, the actions of this hostile crow
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And in an ink black sheath of rye
The mythical sword of blood does lie
Rains Of Love
Soft and beautiful birdsong fills the air
Flowers climb towards the rising sun
Burn brightly as they absorb…
The rains of love
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“A very nice piece. You captured the feel of Spring perfectly” – Lady Valor
The Winged Child
Oh, it is like my heart
Has been set free
From its cage of white
To skip across
The red, red fields of passion
So vulnerable to the golden arrows
Of the winged child
Bleeding Heart
My scarred heart
Bleeds and bleeds…
It bleeds and bleeds
Through fresh wounds
It bleeds and bleeds
For a beautiful vision
It bleeds and bleeds
For a world…
… that could not be
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“I LOVE this! It’s powerful and interesting!” – Authors Paradise
Angel Of Fire
Soft and beautiful notes
Present the golden morn.
Over the horizon
The sun does ascend.
A new day is born!
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Majestic mountains
Do their icy caps shed.
Tulips open
To lap up the sunlight
Flashing their petals of red.
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Rising higher
Into the black,
Like a lunging tiger
Protecting…
It’s beloved pack!
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Oh, the sun’s magical light
Let us admire.
Yielding…
Such a beautiful crop!
An angel of fire!
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A poem reflecting life in every verse. – Harbans
An Ode To Peanut Butter
In the corner of the dark, dark pantry
Lies the jar. Glowing bright
In the shadows of the looming shelves
Sitting. So innocent. Calling.
Shooting waves of temptation
Pulsing, growing, as it tilts towards you.
Drones “Resistance is futile”
Oozing into your thoughts…
Oozing into your bowl
Peanut Satay; the pure streams of heaven
Flowing through the centre of a date
Soothing, it touches your hungry lips
Like fresh rain trickling onto a flower’s buds
As you close your eyes you seem to float
Like a cloud… drifting through the pure streams of heaven.
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“Poetic Perfection” - The Sadder But Wiser Girl
Wolf Howl
An icy mist falls
The full moon
Rises above
Silhouetted hills.
From far off comes
A lone wolf howl…
Blood runs cold!
Scars
On I trudge,
Unflinching
Though whips sear
My bloodied flanks
Like boas
Slashing
At fallen prey
I gaze at the stars,
Unblinking
Though whips add
To my flank of scars
Like lightning
striking
A dying tree
Sometimes
“Leave!” I say.
My words sting my dry lips
I never knew of one,
Who broke his own heart
But sometimes…
One must do evil
To do good!
really nice! Keep going!
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Awesome poetry I loved it all thanks for al the great reading.
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Good work boy!
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Thanks for the nomination!
I’ll check it out!
I am reposting your work on my bloog here: http://insecurebroads.wordpress.com I don’t have a direct link because I am sceduling it out. I love your work!
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All the works you have worked on inspires everybody whosoever goes through these. Every poem, everything including photos emit thoughts, these things of art say many things at the same time. Really motivating.
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Wow, I can just hear those bones breaking and cracking in that poem. Well Done!
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Glad you dropped by. Thanks for the like.
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So versatile! I love your work. I will read a few each weak because I want to truly appreciate them. Thanks for sharing your work and keep them coming
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Thank you for checking out my blog just to update you on my other blog
http://howtocook50deliciousrecipes.weebly.com. I really love your poem ‘those four words’ very realistic and well put, you have very interesting things on your blog, i will have to come back and read them. Take care
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Hello there! Thank you for stopping by my blog and liking my poem
And wow! I am soo into your poems..they’re so soo good..will be looking forward for more ^_^
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I hate peanut butter but your poem reminded me that I once wrote An Ode to Chocolate.
Glad my poem brought back good memories
Fabulous stuff George, keep up the great work and thank you for dropping by my blog today, I really do appreciate your support. Love to you Clarabelle
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Wow. Just amazing! I’m starting a writing blog of my own. Though, my poetry is pretty half-a$$ed compared to these! You’re a very good writer.
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And good luck with your new blog
Bleeding Heart, Winged Child.. U got some good work boss.
Haha, thanks
Angel of Fire … I love it.
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So I take it you have stock in Peanut Butter Cap’n crunch GMan
… I like your blog buddy. Nicely done.
Yup, plenty of peanut butter in the house
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Thanks for visiting my page and liking my poems! I likve yours as well!
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Lovely website with lots to peruse! Your poems are simply awesome and so is your photo gallery. I’ve yet to check out your archives
Keep going, you rock!
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You’re prolific
Haha
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i like your work keep it up
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Wow – you’re such an inspiration! And here’s me just starting out. Thank you for dropping by my blog and keep up the good work. I’ll look forward to reading more of your poems
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I especially like your Haiku! and I voted
Thanks for voting!!
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really like your acrostic type poems. we homeschool our boys and they love doing acrostics too as it is a really good way of writing a poem. x
Wow! We’re home-schooled too
Yeah. At the moment, we’re doing a poetry project, so I’ve got to make a lot of new poems!
I showed my boys your blog and they were so inspired – they thought it was so cool that you are homeschooled like they are. x
Oh. That’s nice
Thanks for sharing it with them!!
Hi! Thanks for following me. It’s truly an honor.
I hope your followers can check my site too.
http://shishicreates.wordpress.com/2012/09/26/143/. Thanks! Have a nice day! :d
You’re very welcome. I love getting followers too. They are more meaningful and real than likes and comments.
Thanks for stopping by my new poetry blog! I really enjoyed ‘Those four words’, and thought it powerful (and of course wondering the whole time … which four words? But don’t tell me- it’s better not knowing!) The idea of being in pain and beyond pain, dead and alive at the same time- in response to (the way I read it) a lover- amazing. I also enjoy the rhythm in ‘You – Like Nothing Else’.
Glad you liked my poems.
Yeah. Those Four Words was written exactly as you read it, except from I sort of know the four words! And yeah, It’s about love. The poem means a lot to me, but also makes me feel emotional. Yeah, I’m sort of not very pleased with You- Like Nothing Else, but that also has it’s own reasons which I don’t really want to share.
Smoothie poem 2.0 is great!
Thank you. Have you voted for it?
Shining Axe and Mountains poem always have my vote, but Lair of the Villains made an interesting read too. Cheers, Nightlake
The Lair of the Villains has a sort of story behind it; quite a different style to the Mountains and The Shining Axe Poem. Thanks for checking out my page!
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My favorite poem isn’t on the poll. I love The Fractured Bone. The rhythm is awesome! It’s very unique and catchy.
Glad you like my poetry!
Fractured Bone Poem will be on the next poll I do. I do a poll for each 10 poems I write.
Great poems! “Those Four Words” is my favorite!
Thank you
Those Four Words. Mmm. That makes me feel a bit funny. Takes me back to the past. Makes me emotional…
Anyway
Have you voted for it on the poll?
Yes I voted!! = D
All the poems have one lesson or the other. Beatiful.
I like the playfulness of such a rich buffet of poems all on one page… Looks like you are having a lot of fun at this blog! Congratulations ~
There are many different types, aren’t there. Do you have a favourite?
And BTW, I wrote a poem yesterday for my work about the Tsavo National Park. Be posting it soon!
I really enjoyed the shining axe poem, the end leaves a haunted feeling -very nice effect
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Your poems are very heartfelt. Maybe you could try to use more original imagery, and perhaps work on structure a little? that would be my suggestions. Or, you could put them together with photos and music, if you have a gift that way – I think that enhances poetry quite a lot, especially for a wider audience.
Yes. The music idea’s a good one. Cheers!
BTW I’m currently writing a song at the mo, which my dad will put to music. This’ll appeal to a wide audience if my singing isn’t too horrible
Some very vivid imagery! I especially like the poems where you use the letters of the title to begin each line– clever, well done! : )
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Have you voted on my poll?
Thanks for liking my blog post. I really like your poetry and your “about” page. Interesting stuff!
really cool blog, its very impressive indeed, fantastic, and thank you for your checking out my blog
You’re welcome
Glad you like my blog!
Real exiting poem. Every poem has its distinct message. Exquistly worded and meaningful. Great.
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Hey, thanks for dropping by and liked my write ups. Yours are adorable too! Look forward for more poems. Have a great day!
Have a great day too!
Thanks for stopping by my blog